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Wednesday, 19 January 2011

Haiku and a Short Unfinished Poem


still looking for faith

we reflect on redemption


so much more needed


a haiku wordgame using: needed, reflect, faith

watching moonlight glow

if I extend my finger


can I touch the clouds


a haiku wordgame using the words: extend, moonlight, clouds
 


We could almost taste the sadness in the air,

linking hands we ran,


pretending not to care,


knowing death chased us still…

7 comments:

  1. Hi Robin,
    This is an intriguing poem. I like your way of playing with words!
    Really good to meet you and thank you for visiting my place.
    I will now follow your blog too! :-)
    All the best,
    Jo.

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  2. PS. I like your choice of music!

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  3. Helllo Robin, I love your poems
    C x

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  4. love your blog! =) if you want to visit mine you can at http://jenniferscavone.blogspot.com

    look forward to seeing you there! =)

    Ciao!

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  5. The words and music were like magic!

    http://www.doreenmcgettigan.com

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  6. I just discovered your blog and I think it's wonderful. Love this post!

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  7. Wow! I'm so sorry. I've not been checking my blog. Must think of some suitable punishment, but in the meantime, thank you so much for all your kind words. I will get back to each of you via your own blogs as soon as I can. Thank you again for all your kind words. So glad you have enjoyed my humble little blog and music choices... Blessings.

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